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It's actually sci-fi, but it fits more here at this point in the story. sorry so long. Arion’s hooves pounded against the earth, leaving small, round marks. He took running ...

Fire tongues leave black scraps In it’s weary wake Charcoal dreams and fallen angels All express their pain Struggling still to snap, to break Before the acid rain I’ve wandered ...

I'VE HEARD THAT BEFORE where did you get it? how long ago did you write it? because, word for word, i thought that was so cool that i pasted it ...

well, you can't call it a tanka if it is not a tanka. so we'll hereby call it the short-tanka-like-poem-thing. otherwise, i think this is a good group of...though rather ...

Please come and sit a while with me By candlelight in moonshine’s hour We’ll whisper to the tongue of fire And wonder where the life’s gone While counting those who ...

you know what, this has got to be the first poem by you that i fully appreciated. you were fiery in emotional, showing true, uncliched anger - as it was ...

Showered in petal drops of stillness Kissing suns as they set Sweet within my flowerbed Earth’s blood glimmers with your sweat Pink’s own passion, fallen red Fair dream weaver in ...

*grimances* well, it was a good poem but it repelled me from christianity, when i was trying to desperately to hang on i don't know. it sort of killed that ...

Pece peace Smashing there is no calm. Smashing, there is no calm i didn't like the ending. in fact, it didn't even sound like an ending. the point was not ...

straighten out the syllables in the first line. in fact, i think you need two new syllables, as "now" is usually added in demanding syllable poems such as this. that ...

okay, writersdomain got here first, so it's pretty much covered, but i would cut out this line from the second stanza: for time to stand still it's choppy and awkward. ...

I'm combining you in my glass dream system from gritty mornings to future it's a project i took on only by free will (you're all numbers to me) is this ...

um, i'd expand creativity. the subject matter of this poem is very bland, the description dry and well...it's not exactly a poem, is it? i suggest, first, that you read ...

i must admit, upon reading the title and the poem, i scoffed. i didn't think he was... that great. :oops: hha the poem is good. not high-quality, but otherwise fair.

add line breaks as boni bee suggested. otherwise, this was cute. sort of dr. suess-like. bite yer. bite yer? lmao